Saturday, February 12, 2011
Group Essay Collaberation
Other than tweaking some things, my paragraph is pretty much the same as what you saw on Friday. for our conclusion, the messages that I think are behind his funny portrayal are that you shouldn’t just do things because of what other people will think, but for yourself, and also that you shouldn't just do something for self gain, but think about the impact it will have on other people. Any other ideas? Other than finishing our conclusion, I don't really have any questions. I think that both your paragraphs are really good, and the biggest challenge will be to get it to flow. Also, how are we going to include epigrams and aphorisms? Does anyone have any in their paragraphs?
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I don't have any epigrams or aphorisms in my paragraph, and I'm not sure how to include them because we didn't talk about it in our intro did we? We have to find a way to get them in without just randomly throwing them into our paragraphs. And I like your ideas for the conclusion! I might send my paragraph to you on facebook so you can proof read it and you could send yours to me too just to make sure that we have everything we need :)
ReplyDeleteI already have an epigram, "“ No man is ever attractive except to his wife.” But, the aphrosims I dont know about. I think we kinda talked about the conclusion... I'm bring in info about Osacar wildes reason for writing the book. Sound good?
ReplyDeletethat sounds good.i think that "three is company and two is none" is an epigram, but i dont know about aphorisms either.
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